I decided to change my two page spread quite a lot. At first I thought it was quite a good two page spread but after close observation i relasied that their was a variety of mistakes which I had carelessly made. Instead of just leaving it I therefore decided to edit it to make it much better. I organised it more by making my introduction a seprate piece instead of just having it mixed in with my columns which looked messy and confusing. I also changed the picture into two seprate photos which I edited more carefully aswell so that they look more outstanding than before.